Wednesday, December 1, 2010

Athletics Story

"Crash!!!!!!" went the clackers. I was off like a rocket coming 2nd place and I was hanging in there. "My legs had pain. "It felt like a saw was cutting through my leg. It was 50 meters left i can do it said my brain. and I did It. I was coming 3rd place i was quit happy of my self.1st place was Connor and 2nd place was tom and i am so happy because I am In the Inter school athletics explores I am In the long jump and I am in the 100m relay I am so proud of my self for my last year at riverdale school.

1 comment:

  1. Good wring you have some good voice in your writing but try to use some more descriptive words not the same ones all of the time but good writing