Monday, July 26, 2010

my puppet

my puppet is a mean puppet because he bullies Bucky and larry. His name is sparrow he is a smelly puppet because he never showers because he would rather be a idiot then have be as clean as a whistle he is as lazy as a fat guy he is good at squashing people

2 comments:

  1. Interesting description, Mike. Could you give more detail about what he does to bully the others. Make sure all your posts have short titles.

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  2. I like how you used similes Mike like "as clean as a whistle." You could describe a little more about how he is good at squashing people. Remember to use capital letters and full stops too!

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