Tuesday, June 29, 2010

pi feed back

This is a lot of work, Mike. It is really well set out and logically arranged. Your presentation is pleasing to look at, although I think you should probably have cut out your pictures straighter and put borders around them
I think that was a good topic but next time speak a little bit clearer. i think your pi was interesting because i never knew how to make a swimming pool. good work congrats mike
Very interesting I never knew it was that hard to make a swimming pool. You've obviously put in a lot of work. Well done.
Good work.lots of research and interesting.
We loved all your specific information and detail but try to look at us when you are talking, but your PI was awesome anyway!!
you put lots of work into it and you researched a lot so we reckon you did awsome congrats mike!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well done Mike we think you did good and we thought the topic was a good choise we also liked how you put the pool liner good job!
Cool! your P.I was really interesting I liked it how you did steps and why you chose your topic about pools!
we think you did well because you spoke clearly and taught us how to make a swimming pool
We think that was great it looked liked you put a lot of efort into it well done mike we think it would be cool if you made a little pool following the step you did
cool but you could try to persade your parents to build a pool. cool but how do you make a heated pool
It was a brilliant idea miky. there was lots of imformation. I would have liked a model but still, Great!!!
great P.I mick and lots of imformation about builting a pool.

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